The overall structure is: Intro (bars 1-4), the Melody (rehearsal A), the Counter Melody (rehearsal B), first variant of the Melody (rehearsal C).

To be added (more or less) are: variant of the Counter Melody, second variant of the Melody, and a Coda.

Some bits that need advice and revision include:

1. Transitions, e.g., bar 13 may be too abrupt.
2. Articulation and breathing.
3. Balance between melody and harmony.
4. Overall emotional arc, e.g., should it end quiet and pensive, or hopefull and upbeat, or something different?
5. Etc. . .

The recording was realized by the Steinberg HALion Brassish Quintet.